Thought I should make a quick start on my enemy character, I wanted the story of them to have been ex soldiers that have been experimented on by the military but it all went Pete Tong (wrong :/ ) and these experiments were once the main characters friends. There is a whole story in progress that me and Jamie are working on as we think this will help in the design process. The enemy iv thrown together is, in short, just awful I really dont like it, I wanted them to be truly terrifying so that if you were playing the game and saw one, you'd actually cry, this type of case for me is Dead Space, this game gave me nightmares. The monsters in them all have creepy long extremities and stuff like that freaks me out loads so I thought this would be ideal for the inspiration for my enemy but its ended up looking to much like the dead space monsters and isnt really fitting for my story at all, below are examples of  dead space monsters and my monster so far.

I wanted a more human feel to my monster as I wanted it to be somewhat recognizable to my main character and I want cybertronic elements......non of these things are visible in my design at all *sigh* still scary though