:S

Iv been looking at my design and its actually driving me mad and I'm hardly at the level I want to be and I know it, but I feel like my level is not progressing and it's not at a standard where anyone would hire me :( I keep tweaking it slightly and its better than it was before but I'm too scared just to be more loose with my drawing style and you can tell how strict im being with it. Thats my wall that I need to break through. So here is the most up to date version and you can see the difference from the last post, I've been getting feed back from some contacts in the industry, its been very helpful and its seriously making me think about just starting again in an entirely diffents art style- no outlining, just working into colour.

The eyes are driving my mad still ARGHHHH!!!! and the eyebrows are too prodominent and the eyes still look cartoony -.-